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Conrad Rice

  • Lounge, The Re: I need voices

    I didn't really know where else to put this, so here it is. I am putting together a machinima series called Plague. If you want to know what machinima is, ...

    Oct 22, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Defenestration of Prague #1

    Hello Cal. I'll be your critiquer for today. Yay! So, you wanted specific comments on your tense and how it flowed. As far as I could tell, your flow went ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jared's Critique Lounge

    Could you rip this apart please? They're my last two entries for Cal's contest.

    Oct 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Mask Maker [3]

    Okay, Jared, I'm here for a review of part 3. This is a Catholic church, right? So, how come the priest has a wife? Priests in Catholic churches take vows ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Entries for Cal's Contest

    006. Maverick Gillie sailed through the ancient structures on her little boat. It hung together by wire, rope, and faith; a derelict amidst ruins. Yet it sailed true and never ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Mask Maker [2]

    Well, hi Jared! I can only hope I will be as helpful to you as you were to me. So, now we get a little more into Joseph's mind. I ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Mask Maker

    Hi Jared! So, you are wondering about your description. Well, first off, where are they? I know that they're in an execution chamber, but you never describe it as such. ...

    Oct 17, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: High School Seniors: Class of 2009!

    I've been having a pretty easy year too, not counting the stuff I'm doing for college. I still don't have a specific one that I want to go to. I've ...

    Oct 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Elephant Boy {twelve}

    Hi Ky! I come again to critique this very interesting story. Let's get down to it. It's like God has taken a penny to the scratch-it lotto card of the ...

    Oct 17, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: I've been here two years.

    Awesome. Congrats.

    Oct 17, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Have a NaNoWriMo.org account? (08)

    Conrad Rice. Yes, I know, I'm super original. Ha ha.

    Oct 15, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: New YWS Feedback

    Cool stuff. But on the choosing your font type, what if somebody wants to do a work in Old English font? Or will the fonts be limited to readable ones? ...

    Oct 15, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: I got published!

    It was a post apocalyptic story. It's here on YWS, in my portfolio as "Dandelion Season."

    Oct 15, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: It's Analogous

    Film is to camera as fish are to water.

    Oct 14, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: I got published!

    I sent off a copy of my story "Dandelion Season" to the BudzusHammer magazine a few months ago. I got a complimentary issue of the September/October 2008 edition that has ...

    Oct 14, 2008


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